Monday, 15 December 2008

Further development of initial idea

Due to certain circumstances we were unable to continue the initial idea of "Burning Love", therefore we have changed the idea slightly to reflect an overprotective mother who fears her daughter is bringing disrespect and disgrace to the whole family.
We are sticking to the initial plot however, are tweaking it slightly. our storyboard:-

1)The first shot is of the mentally disturbed mother (yasmeen) in a dark front-room rocking backwards and forwards on a armchair. Start off with a close-up shot of her facial expressions. 

2)The close- up shot will then stretch out into a medium shot reflecting the mothers body language.                    

3)FLASHBACK-desaturated to reflect that it is in the past.

Thursday, 11 December 2008

Initial story line

The title we have decided on is Burning Love, however we may change this as time progresses.
Firstly we decided to have an extreme long shot of the home belonging to the disturbed father, his wife and their children. It should look something like the image on your left. This is to establish where the incident is taking place.

In the second scene it shows the disturbed father in the kitchen holding a petrol can.
There will be a invisible cut to a close up of the petrol can.

It will then cut to a close up of his face only showing the eyes and nose, showing sweat on his forehead and he will be twitching his eyes to show the anger that he feels.

It suddenly shows him throwing petrol all over the kitchen and as he goes to the front room he stops and looks at the photographs on the mantle piece. He picks up one of the photos which show the husband, wife and two children on the picture, the glass in the frame is also broken.

This leads to a flashback of a previous event of an argument.

Sound of flash.

The flashback will be in black and white and will begin with a low canted angle of a close up of the car door opening and a lady's foot coming out slowly.
There will be a cut to a long shot of the house like the first shot but this time at the window there will be the car from the previous shot also showing the lady walking into the house and saying "Goodbye" to the driver. Also in this shot the husband will be peeking from behind the curtain peering down at her and the car.

Sound of flash.

This Flashback will be a media shot of the wife and husband arguing, however, the music will drown out the sound so the arguing will be heard a little but the viewer will not be able to make out what is being said. Suddenly the male gets wound up, you can see anguish in both their eyes but he picks up the photo frame and throws it at his wife.

Sound of Flash. Back to the present...

Honour Killing.



About the short story

Monday, 8 December 2008

Film Statistics

The first film I have looked at is East is East as this shows the Asian culture which has become more western but the father makes them remain in their culture i.e. weddings, mosques, praying, etc. Their mother who is white British tries to follow their religion as best she can. However, in the clip below it shows the eldest children having bacon and sausages while she and the father have gone to pick the youngest son up from the hospital. Luckily, there's a knock at the door and when the girl answers it she spots her mother and father are walking towards her at the bottom of the street. She slams the door and runs in yelling about them being down the street and they all rush to hide the food and when their mother walks into their living room she knows they've been eating bacon and sausage but just tells the father to put in in the other room while she gets the bedding this is so he doesn't smell the forbidden food, then she tells the girl to "HIDE THAT", which was something she was using to get rid of the food smell. This links in with our opening sequence because Caneze Riaz was happy for her daughters and son to have a western lifestyle but to remain with their culture, whereas the father wanted them to remain in the culture with no relation to the "WESTERN" lifestyle at all. And what "WESTERN" lifestyle they had been introduced to by their mother and friends was making them want to be more involved with the "WESTERN" lifestyle, i.e the eldest wanted to study at college and later become a fashion designer, but unfortunately never got that chance. All this was because of the father...

The clip below is about an arranged marriage, the mother is quite happy for this to happen, however their was an accident with an art sculpture done by one of the elder sons (the art sculpture is shown at the end of the clip). This results in the mother of the other family insulting them for their behaviour and the way they are as a family unit. The mother of the family doesn't take so kindly to the other families remarks and tells them to get out of her house and take "Laurel and Hardy" (the two daughters involved in the arranged marriage). The father from the other family say's to the father of the children and husband of the blazing mother that he has "brought shame on his family". When the family....

Wednesday, 3 December 2008

Articles on the Riaz Family.


Article 1.
Father killed family for being too western

By Nigel Bunyan
Last Updated: 1:53AM GMT 22 Feb 2007

Previous1 of 2 ImagesNext Mohammed Riaz
Clockwise from top left: Caneze Riaz with daughters Sayrah, Alisha and Sophia

A father killed his wife and four daughters in their sleep because he could not bear them adopting a more westernised lifestyle, an inquest heard yesterday.

Mohammed Riaz, 49, found it abhorrent that his eldest daughter wanted to be a fashion designer, and that she and her sisters were likely to reject the Muslim tradition of arranged marriages.

On Hallowe'en last year he sprayed petrol throughout their terraced home in Accrington, Lancs, and set it alight.

Caneze Riaz, 39, woke and tried to protect her three-year-old child, Hannah, who was sleeping with her, but was overcome by fumes. Her other daughters, Sayrah, 16, Sophia, 13, and Alisha, 10, died elsewhere in the house.

Riaz, who had spent the evening drinking, set himself on fire and died two days later.


Relatives broke the news to the couple's son, Adam, 17, as he lay terminally ill with cancer at the Christie Hospital, Manchester. He died six weeks later.

Michael Singleton, the coroner, recorded verdicts that Riaz killed himself and that his victims were unlawfully killed.

Riaz, who had spent all but the last 17 years of his life in the North West Frontier region of Pakistan, met his Anglo-Pakistani wife when her father sent her to the sub-continent to find a husband.

After an arranged marriage, she developed a career as a community leader in Accrington while he, handicapped by a lack of English, took on a series of low-paid jobs.

After Mrs Riaz's father died she "suddenly felt less beholden to Mohammed", a friend said. "She started to develop her own circle of friends and allowed the girls to express themselves in a more western way."

She began to work with women who felt suppressed by Asian culture and many saw her as a role model for young Asian women.

Article 2.
Police wait to quiz father over deaths of wife and daughters in house fire

By Nigel Bunyan
Last Updated: 2:11AM GMT 02 Nov 2006

Killed in the blaze: Sayrah, Sophia and Alisha Riaz
Detectives were last night at a hospital bedside waiting to interview a man whose wife and four daughters were killed in an arson attack within hours of a Halloween party at their home.


Mohammed Riaz, 49, suffered serious burns when the blaze spread through his end-of-terrace house in Accrington, Lancs, at what one fireman described as a "terrifying" speed.

He was resuscitated by fire crews, who smashed through the locked front door, but the rest of his family perished. All were trapped in their bedrooms.

Neighbours in the mainly Muslim community looked on in horror as firemen brought out the bodies of Caneze Riaz, 39, who was a prominent Muslim community worker, and her daughters Sayrah, 16, Sophia, 13, Alisha, 10, and Hannah, three.

The couple's son, Adam, 17, was out of the house at the time of the attack because he was staying overnight at the Christie Hospital, Manchester, where he is being treated for terminal cancer.

His mother had taken him to Manchester and returned a few hours before the blaze. Earlier in the evening the girls had been holding an impromptu Halloween party with friends. Detectives are investigating reports that one later made a desperate last mobile phone call to a friend.

Lancashire police began a murder inquiry within hours of the blaze being extinguished. The force also moved quickly to allay local concerns that the attack may have been racially motivated.

Det Supt Mick Gradwell said: "Already it is clear that there were several seats of fire and accelerants had been used. The cause of the fire is deliberate. The house was secure and locked from the inside."

It was a "priority" of the investigation for his team to speak to the sole survivor, he said. Officers at Mr Riaz's bedside at Wythenshawe Hospital will remain there until he is well enough to be interviewed.

In particular, detectives are anxious to know why the taxi driver, who was resuscitated on the pavement by a fireman, was unable to lead the rest of his family to safety. The causes of death have yet to be confirmed. Although police believe the victims died as a result of the blaze, it remains a possibility that they were killed before it began.

Mrs Riaz, who was half-English, half-Pakistani, was a highly respected community worker in the town. Her job as a project co-ordinator with the Hyndburn Cultural Association involved helping young Muslims integrate with the wider population.

She had also worked as a teaching assistant at her children's primary school, which is only a few yards from the family's home.

The three eldest children had all passed through Hyndburn Park Primary, while Alisha was due to leave next July. Hannah would have started in the school's reception class in September.

Sayrah had ambitions to be a model, while Sophia was an enthusiastic member of a local girls' football team.

Zeenat Begum, 24, who worked with Mrs Riaz and regarded her as her best friend, saw firemen bringing out the victims' bodies shortly after 2am.

"They were brought out one by one," she said. "First they brought out Alisha, then Caneze. We don't know what happened. The neighbours told me they heard knocking from the house, but no one could break down the door.

"Caneze was like my left arm. I can't believe it is real. I spoke to her a matter of hours before the fire.

"I was going to bring some tea round for all the family, but she just said, 'It's okay, I'll just see you in the morning.'

"We were out on Monday to celebrate Eid. She looked stunning, dressed all in red. We had such a fantastic time. I can't get used to the fact that I arrived here in the early hours to see her body being brought out of the house. She is irreplaceable."

Another friend, Saeeda Farouq, said: "I spoke to her yesterday and the family were so happy. I can't bear to think of what happened to them.

"The girls were so pretty. They were like angels. Hannah was so beautiful, with curly hair. She was so happy before with her black and white dress. She had been taking pictures on my children's telephones, playing earlier that night."

Anayat Mohammed, from the Hyndburn Cultural Association, described Mrs Riaz as "a warm, kind and sincere person who was respected across all sections of our community".

He added: "At a time when communities have been polarised by actions taken outside our community, Caneze was a beacon for building good relations between people of different backgrounds."

Article 3.
Marriage fears of father in death blaze

By Nigel Bunyan
Last Updated: 2:44AM GMT 03 Nov 2006

The father of four girls found murdered in their blazing home was concerned about the state of his disintegrating marriage, it emerged yesterday.

Friends said Mohammed Riaz, 49, had begun to fear that his Anglo-Pakistani wife, Caneze, was having an affair.

They are thought to have argued hours before the blaze that destroyed their terrace home in Accrington, Lancs.

Mr Riaz, already with a reputation for being moody, apparently had spoken of feeling isolated from the rest of his family. While he held low-paid jobs and centred his life on the local mosque, Mrs Riaz, 39, a "bright and bubbly" woman, was embracing an ever more westernised way of life and encouraging their children to do the same.

His depression was compounded by the knowledge that his son, Adam, 17, was seriously ill in hospital with leukaemia.

Mr Riaz was resuscitated by a fireman after the Hallowe'en night blaze and is critically ill with 60 per cent burns. Detectives were last night by his bed hoping to interview him when he regains consciousness.

Article 4.
Arson man dies from burns

By Nigel Bunyan
Last Updated: 1:04AM GMT 04 Nov 2006

Five members of the Riaz family died in the blaze
Marriage fears of father in death blaze
A teenager who lost his mother and four sisters in a Hallowe’en night arson attack learned today that his father had also died as a result of the blaze.


Adam Riaz, 17, received the news as he lay seriously ill in a hospital bed with leukaemia.

Detectives then confirmed to him the fact that his father, Mohammed, 49, had been the sole suspect in their hunt for the arsonist.

Mr Riaz, a factory worker, died at 8.33am, having sustained 60 per cent burns in the blaze at the family’s end-of-terrace home in Accrington, Lancs.

He never regained consciousness. His death has been reported to the local coroner.

A spokesman for Lancashire Police said: “We are not looking for anyone else in relation to the murders.”

Two days ago medical staff at the Christie Hospital, Manchester, switched off all the televisions and radios on Adam’s ward before relatives broke the news of the fatal blaze.

An uncle told him that his mother, Caneze, 39, a community worker, and sisters, Sayrah, 16, Sophia, 13, Alisha, 10, and Hannah, three, had all perished in the fireball that engulfed their home.

The five were trapped in their bedrooms as the blaze, started in a number of locations, and accelerated by the spraying of petrol, spread rapidly through the building.

Mr Riaz was found in the bathroom by firemen who had to break down the locked front door.

It emerged yesterday that he had become depressed both by Adam’s illness and the gradual disintegration of his arranged marriage.

Having mastered only a little English since coming to Lancashire with his British-born wife in the late 1980s, he felt isolated as she and the children became increasingly westernised.

Article 5.
'Tormented' husband killed Riaz family
9:04am Wednesday 21st February 2007

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A HUSBAND killed his wife and four daughters by setting fire to their home before throwing himself into the flames, an inquest was told.

Caneze Riaz, who was a popular community worker, died along with her four daughters in the blaze at their home in Tremellen Street, Accrington, last November.

Her husband Mohammed, who worked at a plastics factory in Blackburn, was pulled alive from the house by firefighters but died later in hospital.

The inquest was told that Mohammed had poured a line of petrol all over the house. Three seats of fire were found upstairs at the top of the stairs outside Sayrah's bedroom and outside Caneze's room.

The fire was believed to have been started by a match upstairs.

Mohammed had also poured the highly flammable liquid over Caneze while she was sleeping in the master bedroom with little Hannah, the inquest was told.

Police chiefs said Mohammed waited downstairs as he was expecting the backblast from the fire to strike him.

However when the fire didn't spread to the ground floor of the house, Mohammed walked upstairs and then threw himself into the flames, the hearing was told.

Caneze's DNA was found on one of the petrol cans left in the room. The hearing heard that this indicated that Caneze had woken and tried to get to the door holding the can, before being overcome.

The hearing heard that the motives behind the killings may never be known.

However after the case police said that distance had grown between Mohammed and Caneze and that there were also financial difficulties. Coroner Michael Singleton said Caneze, 39, and daughters Sayrah, 16, Sophia, 12, Alicia, 10, and Hannah, three, died from inhalation of products of combustion.

The coroner recorded a verdict that Mohammed, who suffered 65 per cent burns to his body, killed himself and unlawfully killed his wife and four daughters.

Mr Singleton paid tribute to the fire service for their "heroism" and to police chiefs for their thorough investigation.

He said: "Never within my 13 years as coroner have I had to deal with so many connected deaths or circumstances where the wider community has been so deeply affected by the tragedy."

Mohammed, 49, died at Wythenshawe Hospital from burns and smoke inhalation.

He was identified by his cousin Mohammed Akram.

He was found unconscious in the bathroom In the rear bedroom next to the bathroom, Sayrah's body was found.

Alicia was found on the floor of the front bedroom and Sophia was in bed in the same room.

The couple's 17-year-old son Adam was not home as he was receiving treatment for a terminal illness at the time. He died a few weeks later.

Speaking after the inquest, Det Supt Mick Gradwell said: "We are never going to know exactly why he did it but there are a number of issues.

"Adam went into Christies Hospital that day.

"There were financial difficulties, which were not huge but there was quite a bit of debt.

"Caneze's brother Barry told us about a distancing of Mohammed and Caneze.

"They wanted different things.

"Caneze didn't want her daughters to have arranged marriages but exactly why he did this, we can't give a reason.

Plot of Initial Idea.

Start - Male character throwing petrol around the house.
Flashbacks of events that occured during the day that lead to the consequences we see in the sequence. Female, with another male character coming out of a car and entering a house.
Sound of 'Flash' - Argument between husband and wife.
Sound of 'Flash' - laughter - everyone together as one happy family - Children and parents.
Sound of 'Flash' - Chaos, Children screaming and shouting over their parents arguing telling them to stop arguing.
Sound of 'Flash' Flashback into present (back to the first shot)- throwing petrol.
Then, he looks around and starts crying with regret, holding a matchstick in his hand, about to light it.
Everything flashes 'Blank' for a second.

Target Audience for our second idea.

Our new idea is based on the Riaz family. It is about an honour killing, which in this case it's where the father thought his wife and children had disgraced the family and kills them. This is based on the reality of life therefore should be suitable for over twelve’s as they will be able to understand some or all of the contents anybody under the age of twelve will find it difficult to understand the opening sequence. It is not your typical relationship drama as you don't normally see honour killings in this genre therefore it will be more exciting for the viewer as they may not have watched this type of relationship drama before. The target audience in our new idea differs from our original idea because there is less physical violence and more emotional confusion of the male character. His family are clueless to what he is going to do and think everything is fine whereas the male thinks his family name has been disgraced by his own family because they were becoming to "WESTERNISED". This will be appealing to viewers who like mysteries and enigmas because in the opening sequence it will get the viewers wanting to know questions.

  • Why hasn't he spoken to the family about his problems?
  • Why didn't he think about his son who was critically ill with cancer?
  • How long has he been planning to kill them for?
  • What was his intention by killing them, to hide the fact of them becoming too "WESTERNISED" or because he thought it was the right thing to do for the family name?

Overall, this opening sequence will appeal to a wide variety of tastes. It is only suitable for twelve plus because of the difficulty of understanding the emotional side to this sequence.

Analysis of 'I Want My Husband Back, Please!"

We created this sequence to show continuity and flow in shots. We shot many shots, keeping in mind the 180 degree rule as well as all the different types of shots. We created close up shots, low angle shots, handheld shots and shots using the tripod. All the shots created an empowering effect.

The first shot was the shot is a long shot of the door, after this was captured the next shot is of me walking through the door this continues as a long shot, the next shot was a medium shot of Carla the a POV shot from my view. In the next shot you establish me and Carla, this is a medium shot,  then you visualize a low angle shot in which you see Carla, the final shot is a close up of my, in which you see me slapping Carla, the close up emphasizes the slap making it look more dramatic.

We then edited the sequence by putting shots together to create a continuous sequence that flowed. Over all our sequence flows well and the editing is invisible which makes the clip look more natural. 

Inspirational Video.


These videos were created especially for the Riaz Family and are vital to my chosen theme of Hounour Killing. These reflect indepth feeling and great emotion as the story i was inspired by was non-fiction. We are able to see reality through these videos which makes the chosen theme more sentimental.

Monday, 1 December 2008

Preliminary Task.

This task was created to allow us to test our potential on the continuity of an opening sequence. From this task we gathered the basic knowledge of how to create a sequence that flowed and the basic editing techniques. 

New Idea - Music

Our theme of honour killing requires upbeat music that is adrenalin pumping and keeps the audience hooked.  It also clearly reflects the state of mind the characters are in, this style of music creates an intense feeling and atmosphere.
However the style of music we have decided to go with that is very opposite to the first style is sad, depressing and emotional as it reflects the theme and shows emotion. It enables the audience to connect with the characters.

The Black Eyed Peas - Where is The Love.
This video and track are inspirational as the words clearly reflect violence in the world which connects to our theme. It helps to create an atmosphere that provokes emotion and devastation.
P Diddy ft Faith Evans - I'll be Missing You
This track is one of the greatest tribute songs and the lyrics are highly emotional, the music in the background helps reflect the feelings of regret and remembrance. 

The beat in this track mirrors the state of mind and fast pace of our chosen theme, where the scene is quick and relentless, it also manages to create emotion as opposed to the beat.
Out of all the styles of music that suit our theme this style would be my favourite as the beat and the
violin sound great together. The beat reflects the scene as it is fast paced and the violin helps mirror 
the state of mind the character is in.

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